End the viper

[Pac]

THE Bastard Pac: Is Sitting In Dark Room And He Says Randy Orton You Champ Here Not For Long Because You See I'm Here And That Means Things Will Change Im Going Too Take The Championship From You And Best Part About Is It's Gonna Be On My Debut And That Great: You Think You Vaper I Will Cut The Venom From Your Vans Randy: I'm Going Too Kick You In Jewels First Then Clime To The Top Rope And Jump Off Into Black arrow: That Rko That Moves I'm Gonna Injury That arm: And Make Sure of It Because I'm Best High Flyer In The World And Believe That

[Jon]

I would use google version of Microsoft word if I was you.. I think would help with some of the minor problems, Second wouldn’t really hurt to expand instead of being repetitive.

[Pac]

I would use google version of Microsoft word if I was you.. I think would help with some of the minor problems, Second wouldn’t really hurt to expand instead of being repetitive. I try there guide mode to help sometime I Capitalize Back Over At End Of I missed up

[Pac]

The Camera Cuts Backstage Too See PAC I'M GOING To Counter That Rko Into Brutalizer Beware Randy Orton I ALWAYS Have Plan I'm GOING Too Make sure that shoulder is broken I'm going take you rko away Randy that shoulder will be my target I going to damage you Randy over and over. I'm going to break you very bad and nothing you can Doo I'm bastard and I'm going to show you just that that shoulder will be mine. And nothing you can do about it" that mine your shoulder is mine" and I'm the black arrow will seel your fate randy you will fall pac out and he Walk out see you soon Vaper it's time to bow down to the bastard I will beat you Randy Orton there's nothing you can do about it because I'm going to hit you with the Black arrow and claim my prize the victory and nothing you can do but sit there on your back on the ground out cold and edge can't do nothing about it with his injured neck nothing will stop me from doing what I'm going to do which is break your arm with my brutalizer break both of your arms at 3 and take out the picture nothing will stop me from doing that so it's time to bow down to the king o king of wrestling pac Britain's most dangerous and brow human being on this planet so bring it on then he leaves

[Jon]

Try it like this

The Scene cuts back to the backstage area with the self proclaimed Bastard Pac standing in front of an EBWF backdrop with backstage interviewer Charly Carusso. You can see him jumping up and down getting himself into the zone for his upcoming match with the Viper Randy Orton

Charly Carusso: PAC this coming Warfare you will be making your long awaited debut against the Viper: Randy Orton on the flagship show of EBWF, Warfare. How are you feeling about the match?

The Bastard: PAC After traveling the world I finally made it to mecca of professional wrestling. During my debut match I get the self proclaimed Viper. Well let me tell you I am not intimidated by the Viper.



Use that as a bulletpoint to try and set up your rps. I'm not gonna do it for you but that should at least give you somewhat of a visual on how to make your rp look good and make it effective.

[Pac]

THE Bastard Pac: Is Sitting In Dark Room And He Says Randy Orton You Champ Here Not For Long Because You See I'm Here And That Means Things Will Change Im Going Too Take The Championship From You And Best Part About Is It's Gonna Be On My Debut And That Great: You Think You Vaper I Will Cut The Venom From Your Vans Randy: I'm Going Too Kick You In Jewels First Then Clime To The Top Rope And Jump Off Into Black arrow: That Rko That Moves I'm Gonna Injury That arm: And Make Sure of It Because I'm Best High Flyer In The World And Believe That: You Will Bow To King Of flight: And Get Deatoryed By The Bastard

[Pac]

THE Bastard Pac: Is Sitting In Dark Room And He Says Randy Orton You Champ Here Not For Long Because You See I'm Here And That Means Things Will Change Im Going Too Take The Championship From You And Best Part About Is It's Gonna Be On My Debut And That Great: You Think You Vaper I Will Cut The Venom From Your Vans Randy: I'm Going Too Kick You In Jewels First Then Clime To The Top Rope And Jump Off Into Black arrow: That Rko That Moves I'm Gonna Injury That arm: And Make Sure of It Because I'm Best High Flyer In The World And Believe That: I'm golden child of EBwf and your not

[Pac]

THE Bastard Pac: Is Sitting In Dark Room And He Says Randy Orton You Champ Here Not For Long Because You See I'm Here And That Means Things Will Change Im Going Too Take The Championship From You And Best Part About Is It's Gonna Be On My Debut And That Great: You Think You Vaper I Will Cut The Venom From Your Vans Randy: I'm Going Too Kick You In Jewels First Then Clime To The Top Rope And Jump Off Into Black arrow: That Rko That Moves I'm Gonna Injury That arm: And Make Sure of It Because I'm Best High Flyer In The World And Believe That I'm going to break you arm with brutalizer: and going to enjoy it: and make bow to king" of the Ring pac best high flyer in world" and I do mean in the world" so bring it" on"

[Ben M]

Jaylan,

I've deleted a few of your replies in this thread as they seemed to just be a repeat of your original post.

Also, I'm confused by your use of the "quote" function. I would take Jon's advice, write your RPs in Word first if you can and use a spellcheck. If you don't have Word, you could try Google Docs or Wordpad.

If you're going to add an additional RP after posting your original RP, it's probably better to post it separately rather than replying to your previous RP, otherwise it gets difficult to follow.

Hope this helps.