First! .::Wrestlemania::.

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Brian W.
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Jessy

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Post by Jessy »

Your most brilliant role play yet in my opinion.
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Juan Ramirez
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Post by Juan Ramirez »

I know Mr. Sandow did not ask for my irrelevant opinion, but I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you guys (Jessy, Luca, Jack too) continue showing the effort you have.

Couple of pointers:

Maybe a darker gray would go easier on the eye? Gray like this forum's background.

Wrestlemania's edition we are celebrating is 12.

Again, keep it up!
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Luca_DZ

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Post by Luca_DZ »

Liked that a lot man. You used Damien's intellectual character pretty well, but I think this is not your best, and you could do even better! By the way, this roleplay is really good in my opinion, because it doesn't go around things but goes straight to the point when you talk about Tensai. You have good chances to win the Breakout Championship, I'm sure of that!
Brian W.
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Post by Brian W. »

Juan Ramirez wrote:I know Mr. Sandow did not ask for my irrelevant opinion, but I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you guys (Jessy, Luca, Jack too) continue showing the effort you have.

Couple of pointers:

Maybe a darker gray would go easier on the eye? Gray like this forum's background.

Wrestlemania's edition we are celebrating is 12.


Again, keep it up!
Fixed. Thanks for the advice man. I greatly appreciate it!

And Luca, thank you too! I agree I can do better. I plan on doing another rp tonight. thats right, TWO for one match. Thats how i role.