Unbreakable

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Holly
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Unbreakable

Post by Holly »

I am SO disappointed in this one. Had so much more planned but had to rush it cause I don't have internet signal at the hotel I'm having to stay at so I have to go find Wifi and NOTHING is open on a Sunday night past ten that offers it around here where I could plug in and the battery on this laptop doesn't work. It was basically a perfect storm of DOH's from the start lol. I hope there aren't too many typos and the page keeps doing this funky thing with the apostrophe's so I hope I got that fixed. Didn't have time before they closed to proofread. Thanks to everyone for reading and good luck in your matches!

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Ashlee
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Re: Unbreakable

Post by Ashlee »

This is actually really good. No problems with the punctuation making funny symbols for me. Nice, simple and to the point in the promo. Good work. :-)
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Holly
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Re: Unbreakable

Post by Holly »

THANK YOU ASHLEE!!!!!!! :p
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