2nd Verse

[LuFisto]

"LuFisto, after seeing who she is facing at the pre show and the promo Paige did smiles and shakes her head"

So that stupid little Brit thinks she will humiliate me and beat me?

"LuFisto starts laughing"

Well I beat you in my debut, and this match will be the 2nd verse, same as the first.

This is my first PPV match here, and even if it is on the pre show I am training like it is the main event, preparing like it is the main event, and am going out there and wrestling like it is the main event.

"LuFisto then flexes her muscles and poses"

Do you really think your family makes you better than me?

"LuFisto then starts counting matches off on her fingers"

I have been in hardcore matches versus guys, title matches versus guys, matches where I have bled buckets.

Have you done those things?

No you have not!

If you had done those things then maybe, just maybe you would become on my level.

For now though you are just another win in my column, another loss in your column, and another demonstration of just how damn good I am.

"LuFisto shoves the camera over and goes back to training as the camera fades"

[Ashlee]

This is a good start. I would suggest reading some other RPs and looking at the tips and tricks guide. I am curious about the line spacing too. I would think the spoken words rather than the action should be in quotes, and maybe the text could be in one block rather than on separate lines? I would definitely like an introduction that sets the scene. I see Lufisto smiling and shaking her head, but where is she, how did she see Paige's promo? Why is she smiling.

That will be a good start for some exposition. Then you can build on the promo, which in itself is a really good start in exploring the character. I would like to know more about her. :-)