A Returning Face

[Holly]

Good luck to Nick S. and everyone in your matches! Have a surgery scheduled for next week and working a lot of hours so things have been a little chaotic trying to get stuff done ahead of time. I'm trying something new here with Brie since I've had issues getting a good grasp on her character in the past so feedback would be greatly appreciated if you'd be up for taking the time. :) I hope you all enjoy and thanks to everyone for reading!

"Think like a queen. A queen is not afraid to fail. Failure is another steppingstone to greatness." - Oprah Winfrey

[Jayme]

"I told the world last year that I won the Royal Rumble for a reason and to watch out for me. No one did and look what happened. I walked away the Queen. I’ll do it again this year. Anyone that sees me as a dark horse again this year, well, it’s amazing they can go to the bathroom without assistance."

This paragraph confuses me lol. Brie won the Rumble this year. The previous year was Kamden with Michelle McCool. It came down to her and Velvet and she won. Maybe you meant QOTR last year or Rumble this year?

The other sentence seemed like you were trying to say one thing, then went off with something completely different. Maybe side tracked?

Otherwise good stuff. It'll be interesting to see Super Bitch Brie lol. And poor Torrie, her age is always teased haha.

[Holly]

Yeah what you said I meantm obviously I meant, and I just accidentally wrote the two tournaments backward because obviously I know my own character's history and I mention that correctly in other parts of the RP, lol. You know when you're eyes are so tired the pages is blurring? LOL that was me last night! I was just rushing to finish the RPs after a long, hard day and the two tournaments came out backwards in the sentence than what I said. You know how it is when you're just tired and stressed I'm sure, simple dyslexic-like things like that happen. To clear up confusion the other sentence was basically just saying that if people say Brie as a dark horse after she'd won 2 tournaments in 2 consecutive years they were stupid. As in they are so stupid they need help going to the bathroom. Thanks for the feedback! And yeah, poor Torrie can't really escape that one!

[Cory]

There's got to be people out there that have fashioned their own real life tip-assist. Got to be.

Oh, yeah. Feedback. I enjoyed the promo work. Looking forward to see how Brie Mode evolves.

[Nick]

LEAVE TORRIE ALONE!!!!! SHE'S A HUMAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AN AGING HUMAN!!!

:)

I love this bad bitch Brie. The real one could never.

[Ashlee]

She couldn't. That's what makes this so great lol

[Holly]

Surgery tomorrow so been really crazy busy and just got to read all this but wanted to say THANKS GUYS! I really appreciate it. Was going out on a limb a little by trying this new side to Brie and I really am very happy you all seem to like her! :)