*Shawn walks with purpose to the ring*

Lawler: I don't know whats with this guy he says he "loves" american and he constantly bashes the citizens and fans constantly I don't think champion is in his future.
Shawn Hears this and is angered walks straight up to the announcer who is well passed his prime

Shawn: How dare you I do indeed love your country but is people like you are afraid of one person voicing a opinion other then yours and champion not in my future listen to you can't even form a coherent sentence if you mean I will never be champion then you are sorely mistaken

Lawler: You know Daivari you don't intimidate me I know your moderately talented but you can't stop talking and start doing...

*at this moment Shawn snaps and start laying lefts and right into Jerry and stomping the older legend the crowd begins to boo*

Shawn: Am I doing enough now Jerry huh?

*Takes the seat JR would be sitting in if he had shown up tonight and folds it and lays it near Jerry's head lefts him up to a near kneeling position and sets up for the WMD at this moment Jimmy Jacobs and the trainers come down to separate them Shawn trys to take a shot at Jimmy but is met by a boot to the skull Jimmy begins to leave and the camera is cut to Shawn *

Shawn: I'm coming for you Jacobs

*Shawn being interviewed by Josh Grisham*

Shawn: How dare Jimmy Jacobs come out there in the middle of the example I was trying to make it just proves that none of these american superstars can take me alone if it weren't for Jacobs Jerry would be laying in a hospital bed right now. On Total Recall My debut Jimmy I will make you the example of what I was going to to show Jerry about me apparently being "all talk" I'd love to see Jacobs try to kick me in the face again while I am not distracted, I have wrestled men the caliber of Hulk Hogan , Shawn Micheals , The Undertaker and I don't believe a undercarder never was can beat me See you tonight Jimmy and I hope you have health insurance!

*Pushes Josh down and leaves*

My thoughts it would probably be beneficial instead of doing two different rps do one with a little more depth but other then that solid debut. Also you need Jimmy Jacob's handler's permission for him to make a cameo in your rp. You'll do fine though once you get the hang of things. :D

Jon wrote:My thoughts it would probably be beneficial instead of doing two different rps do one with a little more depth but other then that solid debut. I would highly recommend going and reading some of Ashlee's, Ben's, Dohko's, Miles, or even Jack's on ideas on how to establish characters. I think you'll do fine once you get hang of things. :D

Yeah I see that I just haven't been doing this for a while I mean I even named a character wrong Todd* but Should I redo it now or do it next time or what? and where do I find these things

Cjones96 wrote:

Jon wrote:My thoughts it would probably be beneficial instead of doing two different rps do one with a little more depth but other then that solid debut. I would highly recommend going and reading some of Ashlee's, Ben's, Dohko's, Miles, or even Jack's on ideas on how to establish characters. I think you'll do fine once you get hang of things. :D

Yeah I see that I just haven't been doing this for a while I mean I even named a character wrong Todd* but Should I redo it now or do it next time or what? and where do I find these things

I don't know if redoing it would be beneficial this close to deadline but one small thing I forgot to mention is you need permission of people to use their characters in your rp even the way you did with Jacobs.

Jon wrote:

Cjones96 wrote:

Jon wrote:My thoughts it would probably be beneficial instead of doing two different rps do one with a little more depth but other then that solid debut. I would highly recommend going and reading some of Ashlee's, Ben's, Dohko's, Miles, or even Jack's on ideas on how to establish characters. I think you'll do fine once you get hang of things. :D

Yeah I see that I just haven't been doing this for a while I mean I even named a character wrong Todd* but Should I redo it now or do it next time or what? and where do I find these things

I don't know if redoing it would be beneficial this close to deadline but one small thing I forgot to mention is you need permission of people to use their characters in your rp even the way you did with Jacobs.

I am terribly sorry I'll remember that next time

Do you have msn?

Jon wrote:Do you have msn?

I do not