Just Run and Hide

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Cory
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Just Run and Hide

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From the lies of the beautiful people.
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Juan Ramirez
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Cory, this is one of the best pieces I've read. You write a great Lesnar and a great Paul Heyman.
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Brian W.
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Juan Ramirez wrote:Cory, this is one of the best pieces I've read. You write a great Lesnar and a great Paul Heyman.
I second what Juan said. This is really good Cory. ;)
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Thanks gentlemen, I genuinely appreciate the feedback. This is one for my homies. :pepsi
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Ashlee
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This RP was pretty great from start to finish. I like your Lesnar, it's very believable.

For future readers who want pointers, I'd work on the expo a little bit. The dialogue is very detailed and the expo should be too :-D
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