Dead Man Rising - Part 2

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The Undertaker

Dead Man Rising - Part 2

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It had been slowly getting dark whilst they were talking. One of the hooded men who had the camera, shoved the camera into the camera man's stomach.

Hooded Man #2: "Start Filiming."

The camera man gulped again, and lifted the camera up onto his shoulder.

Hooded Man #2: "Are we live?"

The camera man was shaking, he held up his hand and gave a thumbs up. The Druid stepped into the view of the Camera.

Druid: "Ladies and gentlemen, fans of the EBWF, EBWF management, and wrestlers please take notice, for today is the day of the 2nd Coming. Today is the day that the landscape of wrestling in the EBWF will change. Today every wrestler should start worrying what lays ahead. Today no one will be the same ever again. Now follow me."

The Druid heads towards the entrance of the cemetery. The gates were huge. The camera man shook in his boots, and stuck to the ground, but was pushed from behind by the two hooded men to go forwards.

The Druid stops at the closed gates, and he held out his hands. His palms were facing upwards. He looks up into the sky.

Suddenly the two gates opens by themselves. They creak open.

From somewhere a church bell tolls.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dKmLgjd8rks

Suddenly from no where fog starts appearing.

END OF PART 2
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Jon
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Re: Dead Man Rising - Part 2

Post by Jon »

Not bad but I would recommend not breaking them up into parts and just put it all together and post it when you get finished. :) I like what you're doing so far though.
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Ashlee
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Re: Dead Man Rising - Part 2

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These two pieces were a really good start. I agree with Jon's point. One RP that tells a story is better than several small segments :dreams
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The Undertaker

Re: Dead Man Rising - Part 2

Post by The Undertaker »

OOC. I hear what you're saying, and respect what you're saying, but the email I got sent, I got told that you guys have a card coming up which you do, and then maybe another week before I get to role play for a match, so I thought why not ease my way into things, and work in the Undertaker slowly. If I do it all at once, what else is there to do after that? Wait. I'm not that patient.

So again I respect what is said, I'll just keep adding titbits so to speak. But after that there'll be full on role plays.
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