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*Kofi steps up to the podium set up outside his gym sporting his Red, Yellow and Green wrestling tights along with the flag of his home country, Ghana, wrapped around him*
--Reporters are in front of the podium ready to hear what Kofi has to say—
Kofi: Ladies and gentleman I want to thank you all for coming today, I am happy to announce I officially begin my journey into the EBWF on June 12th as I take on Mick Foley in Springfield, Illinois. I’ve worked my whole life for this opportunity and I can’t believe it’s finally here. My whole wrestling career I feel I’ve been a fake, my name is Kofi Kingston a proud West African residing in Ghana, I am not and never will be Kofi Kingston of Jamaica! I now find myself wrestling not only for myself but also my country that I have a renewed love for, a country I was once ashamed to call home. I am now open to any questions.
Reporter 1: How does it feel that your EBWF debut takes place in their annual KOTR tournament?
Kofi: It’s an amazing opportunity; the timing was just right with my contract being finalized in June when the KOTR tournament comes around. I see this as the perfect opportunity to show what my dear country Ghana has to offer and that WE ARE THE SUPERIOR COUNTRY!
Reporter 2: What are your thoughts on your opponent Mick Foley?
Kofi: Foley? He’s nothing but a drunk who’s standing in the way of glory for Ghana. He may have recently sealed a number one contender spot for the Breakout Championship but that means nothing right now, I’m going to beat Foley on the 12th, I’m going to win this tournament, and then I’m going to take that Breakout Championship.
Reporter 3: Do you feel that you are over looking Foley’s talents a bit? He has a decorated past and is a proven talent in the ring.
Kofi: And am I not a proven talent? Have you not seen my training sessions? Do you not know my past? I’ve grown up in a troubled, ruthless Western Africa; I was forced to leave my family behind to pursue my dream between the ropes. I promised my family I will be on top of this business and I will bring them to America and bring glory back to Ghana where it belongs. No amount of skill can overcome my heart and motivation. I’m smarter than Foley, I’m stronger than Foley, I’m more athletic than Foley and in fact I have more support than Foley, I have a whole country behind me, now how can you beat that? Do not mistake my confidence for incompetence.
Reporter 4: What is this newfound passion for your home country of Ghana?
Kofi: I’ve told you already. My family is there, I was raised there, I honed my skills there, no gyms, no arenas, just fields that went on for miles, Ghana made me who I am today and I was blind to that. I refused to believe this at first, but now I see the light, the light of my beautiful country, Ghana. Now I must leave you, as I must continue my preparation. I look forward to talking to you all after my match on the 12th .
This is a really great start. I would suggest being more descriptive in your exposition.
This was your intro:
*Kofi steps up to the podium set up outside his gym sporting his Red, Yellow and Green wrestling tights along with the flag of his home country, Ghana, wrapped around him*
--Reporters are in front of the podium ready to hear what Kofi has to say—
I have some questions here. :-) Where is his gym? Why are the reporters there? I know they want to hear him, but why? I also suggest writing in past tense because it flows better, but it is not a big deal. Maybe I would write something like:
Kofi Kingston's gym was in the heart of his American home, Tampa, Florida. Anticipation filled the air as an unoccupied podium stood just outside the gym entrance, flanked by eager reporters who were there to hear Kofi Kingston's thoughts about the King of the Ring tournament, his opponent, and signing with EBWF. Flash bulbs went off in a frenzy when Kofi appeared from the gym door, and approached the podium. Despite his current residence, he wore the colors of heritage. His red, yellow and green wrestling tights were accented by the flag of Ghana, which he wore around his shoulders. He wore a look of confidence as he took his first question.
This is just an example of something to do with the expo. I would also suggest watching spelling and commas. Hope this helps!
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