EBWF Titantron...

•.A video is shown in the EBWF titantron. We can see a black man walking in some streets in Atlanta, Georgia. The man stops and talks to some of the boys and girls that were in the street that day. Then we can hear the man talking as he keeps walking.•

•.R-Truth: The streets of Atlanta, Georgia. The streets of my neighborhood. These streets are the one that taught me that everything in life is possible. These streets are the one that showed me that in order to be someone in life, you have to work hard for it. I remember getting up in the middle of the night because I heard some shots and some people yelling at each other and I prayed hardly that one day this will all be over. The terror will be over, the fear will be over, but more importantly the poverty and the failures will all be over.

•.The man kept walking and waving his hands to each kid, boy and girl that he saw, and never stopped smiling.•

•.R-Truth: But as I kept growing up I started making my own decisions. But my decisions weren’t that good. I ended up doing bad stuff, selling drugs and fighting with other hoods in order to make some loot so my family could have something in the dinner table. But what all that gave me back…was prison. Iended up being locked up in a cell a few years…and I realized what I had done. I realized that what my mother taught me, what these streets taught me and what I knew…was enough for me to get on with my life. So I found my passion.

•.A motivating music in the background started playing as the man kept smiling and walking. The camera showed the houses that were in the neighborhood and the people that lived there, as he kept talking.•

•.R-Truth: I became a professional wrestler. I have been around in many independent circuits and I have been proving to myself and to others that I am more than what I used to be, and that I can become whatever I want to be…because it is possible. Finally, the big chance came…and I am now a part of EBWF…and I am looking forward to my debut so I can show what I’m made of…what I’m capable of doing. I want to show in EBWF that I am…a winner. No matter how hard life hits us, we just have to keep moving forward. So we stand up, and say what’s up? EBWF Universe…R-Truth is coming soon!

R-TRUTH’S DEBUT…COMING SOON

OOC: This is my presentation RP. I repeat, this is my first RP in an efed like this so I'm not very familiar with the format but I hope that I did good. Please comment and give constructive criticism so I can be a better role-player. Blessings!

This is a great introductory RP, and the format is fine. If you wouldn't be offended, I can help you with some of the English. The most major one I saw was this.

These streets are the one that thought me that everything in life is possible.

This is the word thought, I think you meant taught.

Thought - an idea, or something that pops into your head. Example: I had a thought.

Taught - Something that someone teaches or educates you about. Example: They taught me well.

Yes! Thank you. I don't consider myself an expert in english and I'm still trying to work in it. It would help me a lot :)