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Going Deeper (Peep Show 17/08/2012)

Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 2:17 pm
by David
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Beyond the Ring


[Jay Reso was shown to be waring a white short-sleeved shirt as he sat behind a mohogany desk with just a gray desktop lamp lit that revealed part of his face and his neatly trimmed beard. He showed hints of sadness, it was obvious that this wasn't the Jay Reso seen on camera. The camera zoomed out and showed a pen in Jay's right hand which was hanging over a notebook as he tapped away at it with the pen, seemingly oblivious to the outside world as he was engulfed in his own thoughts. He began writing, as a voice-over of him was heard speaking what was being written.]

Jay Reso: 2012 Journal Entry #1. Wednesday, August 15th 2012. It's been 4 matches since my debut here in EBWF and yet something's missing. It just isn't the same without Adam... We were like brothers back then... Maybe I should reach out, but after what's happened, I don't know if that's the right thing to do. Terry's been keeping me updated on him, and we talk sometimes, but it just doesn't feel the same. Me and him, we have been through the ringer but things were never this bad. Should I risk it all and try to restore what was once a friendship so strong that it was like family... Or should I just stay happy that we can still talk?"

[Jay rubbed his eyes and continued to write.]

Jay Reso: "Maybe it's pointless to try... Maybe it'll never be the same again... Maybe I should just walk away from it all and focus on what really matters... Ashley and my career. I mean... we still talk don't we... Why fix something if it ain't broken in the first place. Yeah... that makes sense, just let it go. That's the Captain Charisma thing to do, don't dwell on something not worth dwelling on. That's all for today, I guess... nothing else on my mind, other than Ashley, but I can't put THAT into writing, someone might read it. I still have a lot of thinking to do on the Adam issue, this isn't the last time I've wrote or said anything about it.

[Jay threw the pen straight up making it flip several times in mid-air, now with a slight smirk on his face. As he closed the book, the pen landed right on top of it as Jay got up from his chair and out from his desk and the cameras faded to black, ending this scene.]

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The Peep Show


[The scene opened with the weekly episodic internet show: "The Peep Show" generic rolling and it cut away to Christian in a hotel room, standing in front of a black curtain with the Peep Show graphic on it and nothing more on screen. He's wearing a sleeveless black shirt and plain white jeans, he smiled at the camera, took a deep breath and began to speak.]

Christian: Hello, my peeps and CLB's watching this via all technological means necessary for your enjoyment. As always, my name is Christian and this is the Peep Show. Before anything else, I'd like to say, kudos to The Miz for hiw win at Warfare, I hate to say it... but he won fair and square, maybe next time, Miz! Now, that's in the past and I'd like to talk about the Present and the Future. Presently, I'm in a match to determine the #1 Contender for the Path to Glory Championship, and I'm up against Austin Aries, Wade Barrett, and Daniel Bryan. Three men who have made a name for themselves in this industry thanks to their abilities, and because of that, they have my respect professionally, and I wish them all the best in their future endeavors..err... I mean, our match at Summerslam. That takes care of the present, and now the future... In the future, one man known as Christian will gain the Path To Glory championship for the first time ever, and climb one more rung in Christian's Ladder to Greatness... Not catchy either? Okey... back to the drawing board with names. And now, some messages from the peep show sponsors...

[The scene cut away to an image of a peaceful garden with butterflies floating around it. After a while Rhyno appeared with his hair all messed up and wearing black cargo shorts with a ripped up gray t-shirt as a heavy metal riff plays in the background.]

Rhyno: CHEER FOR CHRISTIAN, OR ELSE...


[Rhyno speared an obviously fake, cut-away tree in the back.]

Rhyno: GORRREEEEEE!!!!!

[Rhyno breathed heavily as the scene faded back into Christian in front of "The Peep Show" background and looking into the camera with a look that merely expressed his feelings of confusion.]

Christian: What... The... F#&@!


[Captain Charisma shook it off, and just continued...]

Christian: Okay, my peeps, before I'm done it's time for a new segment on the peep show... It's... "Promo Time!" In this segment I take time out of my VERY busy schedule and just talk about my upcoming match. Here's this week's promo for the Path To Glory number one contender fatal four way match...


[The camera cut away to the same scenario from last week, with Christian wearing the same clothes from the peep show, sitting on a brown sofa with a black curtain behind him. Next to the sofa, there was a glass table with a glass cup of whiskey, that rested on a dark blue coaster.]

Christian: Welcome back viewers, to Promo Time, a segment where I verbally abuse my future opponents before beating them in an actual match... This week, we'll go over my three opponents for Warfare: Wade Barrett; Austin Aries; and Daniel Bryan.


[As he began talking about Wade, footage of Barrett performing in the ring began appearing on-screen.]

Christian:First up, the man from across the pond, Wade Barrett. Funny thing about Wade is, he just can't give up... Yeah, he might take shortcuts, and yeah he may not be the most honest piece on the board but he does get the job done, one way or another, either by himself or with a pack of lackeys behind him. But that's where I come in... Wade may get the job done somewhere else, but I am not a former World champion for nothing, I've been in the ring for a couple of years, and let's just say I know my way around any of my adversaries' tactics.


[Now that he was talking about another one of his opponents, footage of Austin Aries began showing.]

Christian: Next up, is double A... no, not Arn Anderson... Arn isn't doing a surprise return, not here, not now, not ever... I am, of course talking about Austin Aries. Austin... A wise man once said "Your mouth is writing checks your ass can't handle." Kid, you talk a big game, you got the whole over-confident thing going for you, you're young, arrogant and brash... But a piece of advice, when it comes to wrestling, it's not the talking that counts, it's what you do when the bell rings and you find yourself in a predicament that you can't talk your way out of. And by the way... Indy Reject!? Son, I am, always have been and always will be in the big leagues, out of us four, if any one of us is an indy reject... It's you. So, in a rare instance, I'd actually like to take Dwayne Johnson's words into account when I say: Shut your mouth and know your role!


[Footage of Daniel Bryan now began appearing.]

Christian: And last but certainly not least, Daniel Bryan... Not a whole lot to say about Daniel... Is he talented? YES! Is he experienced? YES! Has he paid his dues? YES! Is he going to lose at Warfare? YES! Am I going to be the one winning? YES! YES! YES! YES!


[The scene faded out with Christian copying Daniel Bryan's catchphrase and faded back into Christian in the peep show set, who was all smiles.]

Christian: Modesty aside... That was a damn good promo! Alright, guys, thanks for watching, remember to put a like on this video, a favorite, a comment and subscribe to my channel; Go back and watch all the previous editions of “The Peep Show”; Follow at Christian4Peeps on Twitter… and remember: My heart beats for my peeps!

[The scene fades out, ending the peep show and entire segment.]

Re: Going Deeper (Peep Show 17/08/2012)

Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 2:49 pm
by AustinAries
I liked it! Good Luck!

Re: Going Deeper (Peep Show 17/08/2012)

Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 3:02 pm
by David
Thanks! Right back at you!

Re: Going Deeper (Peep Show 17/08/2012)

Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2012 4:05 am
by .CM.
Hello hello

First off, kick ass job here and I really enjoyed what you've done. I actually LOL'D when Rhyno appeared for no reason at all. The entire thing was a good read but it was in a kind of downward spiral in that it kinda tailed off towards the end so it seemed like you wrote it all in one sitting? Maybe write half, go take a break and do something and then write the other half and you'll notice the difference and things like description won't slip towards the end. Dude the character is down and it takes a lot for me to LOL by reading something. I'm really looking forward to seeing more from Captain Charisma :) Best of luck.

Re: Going Deeper (Peep Show 17/08/2012)

Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2012 9:12 am
by David
Yeah, I actually did write it in one sitting, in retrospective, that wasn't such a good idea LOL

Re: Going Deeper (Peep Show 17/08/2012)

Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 10:52 pm
by Holly
The voice-over threw me a little at first because I wasn't sure if the "thoughts" were really his or just a part of a scene for "viewers" but I really liked the insights that you showed in the opening part and the random Rhyno cut-away was funny. Randomness can be great lol. :)