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Introducing... Brawn.

Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2012 8:31 pm
by Juan Ramirez
So... Just a few things:

1. Best of luck to my man Will.
2. New layout (sorta).
3. It has been a while since I last wrote a decent RP. Forgive me for sucking so bad, I hope you enjoy this:

http://kenkennedy-ebwf.blogspot.com/201 ... brawn.html

Oh! I almost forgot...

4. Feedback = Cookies.

Re: Introducing... Brawn.

Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2012 6:28 am
by .CM.
This is absolutely class!

I really like the little details like.. simple things like having the pic of the mri and having the doctor speak like a doctor. Heyman usually speaks for a character who is a snooze on the mic, but when you put with Anderson then it's really cool. You have the character down to a t (Heyman too). I was really impressed with this, fantastic.

Re: Introducing... Brawn.

Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2012 9:10 am
by Ashlee
Juan is a doctor. So I'm sure it was a stretch for the doctor to sound like a doctor :p

Re: Introducing... Brawn.

Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2012 9:52 am
by D.J
My man! Great stuff here! #Coalition

Re: Introducing... Brawn.

Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2012 9:53 am
by .CM.
Ah! This makes sense now :P I was like "How does he know all this shizz O_o"

Re: Introducing... Brawn.

Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2012 11:01 am
by Will
Dr. Dohko, can I have a lollipop when your done? This was a great one man.