A day or two after the latest episode of warfare
A mysterious video was uploaded on the ebwf website.

The video begins and we see alexa bliss in an undisclosed location .

Bliss once again has half of her face painted

Bliss: hello world now for those of you that watching this and wandering why this video is on the ebwf website instead of the usual content
The answer is that me and a couple friends have hacked the website.

Now I know your probably wandering why am I hacking the website to upload this video.

The reason is because I need to say something I need to give you a history lesson you see because it seems that most of you and the ebwf have forgotten who I am.

So let me begin when I came in to ebwf i was apart of a group.
Sadly we weren't a group for long then after that I went on my own and eventually won the women's royal rumble in 2016 and I went on to wrestlemania and I beat your hero trish stratus to become the women's champion which was the greatest moment of my life.
But ever sense that night the ebwf has done everything in their power to screw me i eventually lost my championship and I never got a fair one on one match to get it back I won the royal rumble again but instead of getting a one on one match at wrestlemania my title match got turned into a triple threat and I didn't win.

And now we get to where we are right now
I've been on a fluke losing streak and I wondered what I needed to do to get back on track.
I then realized that needed to get darker i needed to unleash the darkness that has been building up inside of me for years.

Now my problems aren't just with the ebwf I also have problems with the fans.
Now I'm not talking about all of you because there are those of you that have supported me through everything and to those of you I say thank you.
But to those of you that boo me because of jealousy or because I'm not one of your indie darlings you will be guilty because what I did after warfare and what I do from here on out will on the heads of management and on your heads.
Until I get back what is rightfully mine people will get hurt I don't care if your tam Nakano, I don't if your becky lynch and winter, and I don't care if your trish stratus.
You know after what I did to that crew member people that I have a cold and black heart
and you know what most of that is true.

bliss laughs as the video ends.

Hi there! I really enjoy what you are doing with Alexa Bliss and I liked that you implemented some of her history in this. Tony played her before and did quite a bit with her, so it's cool to see some of that included. I know you two have talked in messages about it. I really like Alexa and enjoy seeing the darker side of her character, it suits her well in my opinion.

My only recommendation is to elaborate just a little bit more on some or your scene details. For example, when you talk about Alexa's face paint, perhaps give some description on what the face paint looks like. Color, pattern, Does it completely cover half her face with thick paint (or is it haphazardly applied?) etc. Same with her location.. even if it's undisclosed - give some detail, even if just a little. Is she in a warehouse? At the docks? In an alley? Walking down a street or in a Cemetery? What about her outfit? What is she wearing? Is her hair down loose around her shoulders, or tied back? Is she in wrestling gear or street clothes? Just sprinkle a few of those things in between what she says and I think you're golden :). It allows for readers to envision your character better when you include those little details and helps capture what you are trying to portray.

Maybe when having her talk, break up the talking with a few sentences of scene description. Ex:

"And now we get to where we are right now ... I've been on a fluke losing streak and I wondered what I needed to do to get back on track.
I then realized that needed to get darker i needed to unleash the darkness that has been building up inside of me for years."

Alexa Bliss paused for a moment, her demeanor changed as she spoke about the darkness building within her. Alexa suddenly glared at the camera in front of her.

"Now my problems aren't just with the ebwf... I also have problems with the fans!"

Anyways, I hope this helps. Just some helpful hints, please don't feel offended in anyway as I think you're doing awesome, and I can't wait to see what else you do with Bliss. If you ever want to work together, feel free to inbox me or Tony at anytime. Hope you enjoy it around here. I know it's slower pace than most places left out there but it's family here :)

- Jayme

Thanks for the recommendations I will keep that in mind for future rps i am not offended at all I enjoy feedback.

I will contact you if I need help with anything.


Once again thank you and be sure to stay tuned cause it has only just begun