The segment starts with Jerry "The King Lawler" backstage talking with Jim Ross while taking coffee in the cafeteria after lunch .


JL : Hey JR , you know what the EBWF public relations agent told me earlier today ?
JR : That you have finally been charge with sexual harrasement by the divas ?

( JL takes a zip of his coffee with a funny look on his face)

JL : No , although i wouldn't mind one of them rocked my world ! But no , he told me he would be signing a new talent this afternoon to a full-time contract , a guy that is so electrifying he puts the watts in the lightning bolt , a true entertainer . I just hope for god's sake it's not another young guy with a "im all that attitude" , god i miss the good old days when i was king of wrestling and you were the ...... well thinking about it you're always the same JR even that belly of yours and i can see you're looking at those apple pies , might i remind you you already had desert !

JR : You got me king i didn't hear a word you said , that pie is really making me itch , and it smells so good !! (Directed at the stewardess) Im sorry missy please bring me one of those pies will you honey ?

ST : Sure JR i'll be right back!

JR and The King spend a couple of minutes talking to each other , after a while King goes to the can and a big guy pinches JR in the shoulder and as he looks back and up he sees The Rock with a pie in his hand .

Rocky : IF YOU SMEEEEEEEEEEL , WHAT THE ROCK IS COOKIN !!!!!!

He then throws the pie straight at JR's face and just walks out of the cafeteria with a tall walk stance very confident of himself . King chases him down to the parking lot and confronts him .

King : So you're the new face here at my long time home , what makes you think you can just come in here and abuse someone like that ? That's just uncalled for !

Rock stays silent for a bit , then finally gets his head up high and responds in a cocky tone .

Rocky : King , King , King . I'm not the new face , i'm the future , i'm the one where the spotlights should be , i put the I in PIE , i raise my eyebrow and you better put down your crown , I AM .. The great one . Oh i know you haven't seen me in action , but wait , you just wait . Now get out of my face before The Rock takes that crown , shines it sideways and sticks it straight up your candy ass !


Rock get's in his black Hummer , the camera closes in , Rock opens his window and looks at the camera for a bit then raises his eyebrow then drives off . King just stands there not even knowing what to say .



It's my first time in a E-FED , so i'm sorry if it's very weak , and advice , tips and critics will be well taken as i look to improve and have a good time here .

Hey man,

First of all welcome to the EBWF. This is definitely a great place to start your e-fedding career.

As far as your RP goes, I thought I'd try and give you some pointers. First of all, you might want to go back and watch some old you tube clips of The Rock. I'm not saying you have to be exactly like the way he was/is in real life, but it will definitely help you get a little bit more of a feel for the character. For instance, The Rock speaks in the 3rd person 99 percent of the time. Also he always does a good job of connecting things on his rants. So just make sure you re-read your RP after to make sure it flows, in this one I would be trying to picture the Rock saying what you wrote, and right when it'd start to make some sense you'd jump to something else and it threw me off a little bit.

Don't want you to think I'm cutting you down, would love to see you play a great Rock, as I haven't seen too many in e-feds. (Dohko I heard you were awesome.. sorry I missed it.) Hope this helps.. good luck.

DJ

Thanks m8 , all help and pointers are welcome i hope i can be good i enjoy writting . I'm a bit unsure as to what i can do , if i can use wrestlers in my promos , do a in program RP like after a match or even a middle match RP .

Well to use other wrestlers in your RP's you simply have to ask their permission. As far as doing promo's during shows. You can submit segments to Ben and Ashlee and if try to fit it into the shows. We do a weekly recap show called "Total Recall" Every week that people submit segments to, I'd definitely recommend this to you, as it is a great venue to practice getting into your character so that you are best prepared for a match. Hope this helps, let me know if you have any other questions.

DJ