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Just Run and Hide
Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2014 10:53 pm
by Cory
Re: Just Run and Hide
Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2014 12:41 pm
by Juan Ramirez
Cory, this is one of the best pieces I've read. You write a great Lesnar and a great Paul Heyman.
Re: Just Run and Hide
Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2014 2:28 pm
by Brian W.
Juan Ramirez wrote:Cory, this is one of the best pieces I've read. You write a great Lesnar and a great Paul Heyman.
I second what Juan said. This is really good Cory.
Re: Just Run and Hide
Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2014 8:03 am
by Cory
Thanks gentlemen, I genuinely appreciate the feedback. This is one for my homies.
Re: Just Run and Hide
Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2014 10:11 am
by Ashlee
This RP was pretty great from start to finish. I like your Lesnar, it's very believable.
For future readers who want pointers, I'd work on the expo a little bit. The dialogue is very detailed and the expo should be too :-D